You seem on track to finding that balance between nuance and expression, nice work! I also like the background design as well.
You seem on track to finding that balance between nuance and expression, nice work! I also like the background design as well.
This is sakuga material. There's a strong sense of impact and punchiness during the fighting sequences, and the impact frames are really good too!
I remember you writing about this from Ozone's thread. Very surreal and abstract! I wonder what its meaning is...
Wonder indeed🤔
Your shorts this past year were excellent. Good luck with your new projects!
I've noticed a trend in your recent works with these characters having a kind of laid-back theme, which I thought contrasted with the previously fast-paced and witty shorts. I appreciate you're now going in a different direction since then, but I think there's some kind of expressiveness and exaggeration in the way the characters act that's been lost. I can imagine this might be a difficult balance to strike, but best of luck!
Thank you! I am going for a more grounded take, so I'm trying to make the characters more nuanced without losing personality, but room to improve on for sure. Very constructive!
Although I'm a bit sad that some of the original cartoons with Spusky Gus and Fluffy John are gone, I really like this new story and I'm eager to see where it goes from here. I also enjoy the simplistic art style as well. Very nice work!
Animator and cartoonist. I'd put a silly quip up here but I can't think of anything at the moment.
Age 22, Male
Pratt Institute
New Jersey
Joined on 2/22/16